http://dendron-ges.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dendron-ges.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] breakinglight11 2011-05-07 03:24 pm (UTC)

I must confess that I have a little difficulty getting the flow of the last two lines (though they do work a bit better when I say them aloud, rather than just reading them in my head), but overall, this is really really cool. If you're writing a whole play in meter and rhyme and all, I am totally in awe of you! :)

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