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Who is she...?

So, if you're into historical costuming, you have to know that one of the biggest gripes that people have with period dramas is the way that they handle or don't handle the hat situation. Throughout many periods of history, it was part of the respectable person's default wardrobe to have some kind of head covering. And yet you can see so many movies and plays and TV shows supposedly set in historical eras where people don't wear hats at all or they only wear hats sometimes or the hats that they wear are completely ahistorical.

And it's not like it was difficult to find information on the subject. They show up in diaries, in portraits, in photography once that was an option, in catalogues once they were being sold commercially. And yet this is something that historical dramas very frequently get wrong. And I have to admit, our show Mrs. Hawking is no exception.

While this might just seem like an oversight, there's actually a bunch of reasons for it, and it might be a little bit more complicated than you think. The first reason is probably the most obvious one, the fact that sometimes historical accuracy is not the number one priority of the story being told. As we've discussed many times in other videos on this channel, costumes are a tool for telling the audience what to think and feel, and clothes are communication that creates impressions in the audience. While that might be the context within the world of the show, the costume designer may be concerned about other things like whether the actor's hair is visible or the effect on their overall appearance. The designer might be concerned that to our modern sensibilities, hats might seem overly formal or stuffy, and that's not supposed to be the character's vibe. We're always speaking to a modern audience, so we have to use signifiers and language that we're confident that they're going to understand.

Now, a lot of people would prefer the designer not talk down to them and use the visual language of the period to create a sense of a totally different world and just count on the audience to be able to follow along. [music] And I totally sympathize with that. However, there's also a practical dimension of this that is kind of inherent to the mediums of film and theater themselves.

All the design choices about styling the actor needs to be in the service of creating a character. And that needs to facilitate all the tools in the actor's toolbox that they're going to use to make you believe that this person is a fully rounded being. The center of any character is going to be what the actor does with their face, their expressions, what they do with their eyes, the shape of their mouths. And unfortunately, hats can kind of interfere with that. Hats, particularly the big fancy ones common in the 19th century, have a tendency to visually dominate the actor's head. Sometimes during big important emotional moments, an actor doesn't want to have to worry about whether they're getting eaten up by a big distraction around their most important instrument. In the Mrs. Hawking shows, we often find reasons to dispense with the hats during such moments, so the actor finds themself totally unencumbered when they're trying to express themselves.

It can also pose technical problems, too. You'll notice that even now there is a big old shadow on my forehead. Theater and film require a lot of light to be blasted directly onto the actor so that you can see everything that you need to see. Hats have a tendency to cast shadows on your actor's prime asset. And it's very hard to either design the lights not to interfere or for your actor to constantly be worried about whether the audience can see their face.

I remember a lot of folks in the historical costuming community discussing the bonnets that they saw in the new Netflix adaptation of Little House on the Prairie, commenting that they didn't seem particularly useful for anything because they stood so far away from the head. But personally, I thought they were clever because I think they were designed so that the characters could wear bonnets like they were technically supposed to without any shadows being cast on the actor's faces.

Heaven knows we put a lot of work into our Victorian looks, including fabulous hats like this chic little number created by Lisa Volonte and worn by Kim Dauber. So, if you'd like to see how we handle the challenge and all of the fabulous hats that we've used over the years, you can see all of our shows for free here on YouTube, Mrs. Hawking.
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For the fifteenth year in a row, I have completed the 31 Plays in 31 Days challenge, where I write a scene of drama for every day of the month of August.

This was certainly a rough one, kids— possibly the roughest one in recent memory. While I try to write pretty consistently, I get in periods where my head is more into it and less into it. These last several weeks I’ve been much more interested in making things with my hands, like knitting a shawl or making a new custom doll. I also yet again managed to forget that August was coming up, so didn’t do any planning or prep that might have made the challenge easier, and frankly more useful. So I really felt like I was dragging myself through this time, and I’m afraid my quality kind of matched.

My biggest disappointment is with what I wrote for Skin Deep, my feminist aging horror screenplay idea. I would really have liked to fix/finish it up this month. But I just couldn’t get my head into it, and never felt like I could spend the time structuring out the plot, which meant drafting new scenes was just too hard. And I feel like I didn’t really execute on the ideas of the few scenes I did feel able to write. I’m annoyed with myself, since I think this could be a really good piece if I can actually make it work. But everything just came out either too obvious or not hard-hitting enough.

The thing I’m most pleased with is the progress I made on adapting the Wodehouse story The Purity of the Turf. It’s something I’d been thinking a far bit about but hadn’t actually done much drafting for, so it proved to be a good direction for the challenge. It’s an adaptation, but it requires a fair bit of restructuring, so the fact that I was able to figure out how to reconceive of the story while also coming up with some good jokes. That one was fun, because I enjoyed imagining Richie and Alex reprising their roles as Bertie and Jeeves. I always find it inspiring when I can hear the actors in my head.

( Here are the characters I wrote about this time: )

( And here are the projects I worked on: )

These spreads of numbers are pretty usual for me. I maxed out at five characters in a scene, which isn’t extreme, but I did have more five-plus scenes than I usually do. I also notice that is the first year ever I didn’t write any scenes for Mrs. Hawking. I have the mainline series completely written at this point, so there’s currently no press, but I do plan on dabbling in the world further at some point. So that’s a bit of a strange feeling.

Favorite scenes? That’s a bit tough, since I don’t think my output this year was fabulous. I liked many of the IDEAS in the Skin Deep scenes, such as #27 - Mother Wound and #17 - Nothing Else to You, but I was disappointed with my execution of them. Similarly with some of the Lacuna scenes, like #23 - Discord.

As I said, I think my Purity of the Turf stuff was my best work, so I’m pretty happy with #8 - Operational Security and #9 - A Beautiful Egg. But I think my very favorite was #14 - Unprepossessing Ovoid, as I managed to nail both the structure and the humor. I actually think The King’s Ankus adaptation was coming out nicely, but I felt weirdly guilty because it didn’t need a lot of restructuring work, so it kind of felt like cheating.

Favorite lines? Again, don’t think I dropped a lot of bangers this time around. But I got a few funny ones in Purity. “I shall tell you what I told Lord Kitchener— just doing my duty, sir,” from #14 - Unprepossessing Ovoid. The title line of #9 - A Beautiful Egg, plus “There is still the looming threat of Mrs. Goodthrift, whom rumor asserts packs her gloves with pie weights.” I wish I could take credit for “I spoke to them in the dark, and then they lay still,” from #30 - Dried Up, but that’s Kipling’s art, not mine.

So, there it is. The challenge served it purpose in that it got me to draft, to make progress on projects that I wouldn’t have otherwise made. I am reflexively a bit disappointed in myself that the quality of my work wasn’t better, but as I am continually reminding myself, it’s all part of the process. Once it exists, it can be fixed, and that’s the first step on the path to making something good.

Still wish my focus hadn’t been so shot, though. :-P
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And with yet another scene of of "The King's Ankus", I have actually managed to finish the challenge! YAY I WAS REAL WORRIED THERE FOR A MOMENT.

Again, this is in direct sequence after the last scene, #30 - Dried Up. This is proving really easy and fun to adapt, so I'm sure I will finish it, even though I only started it because I was desperate to fill out this challenge.

I guess that's what it's for, isn't it? Getting me to write stuff I might not have otherwise... huh. Funny how that works.

( Day #31 - Drinker of Elephant's Blood )
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More of "The King's Ankus"! Thank God I felt like doing this, or else I'd never have managed to catch up.

This picks up immediately after the previous scene, #29 - The White Hood. It contains (*Ren Hoek voice*) SNAKE MADNESS.

( Day #30 - Dried Up )
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A second scene of a radio adaptation for Rudyard Kipling's Jungle Book short story, "The King's Ankus"! This follows immediately after the previous scene, #28 - "Shed Skin".

A decision I have to make is how closely I want to stick to the style of Kipling's diction. I really like the way it sounds on the page, but I'm not sure how well it would translate to performance aloud if scrupulously reproduced. Particularly in an American accent; could sound awkward to say. For now, I'm using it, but I'll have to test it with actors to really see.

( Day #29 - The White Hood )
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Okay, the origin of this one is odd!

The other night, I was reading something that I thought was going in the direction of where an object is considered cursed because its value makes people keep killing each other in order to steal it from each other. It didn't end up going that way, but it reminded me of my favorite story in that vein, Rudyard Kipling's "The King's Ankus." This is a great, haunting little story that makes up a later part of The Jungle Book. So today I found myself reading it, and when Bernie asked me what I was doing, I ended up reading it aloud to him. It's a really good story, beautifully written in Kiping's unique poetical voice, and it struck me that since I desperately need to fill out this challenge, it might work well as an audio adaptation.

So, what the hell! Here's a stab at radio-ifying "The King's Ankus!"

( Day #28 - Shed Skin )
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A scene from Skin Deep that is very important, but is not hitting the way it should because of rush. Will have to fix later.

Important to remember for this scene that Juliana and Eve, as my Jekyll and Hyde, are one and the same.

( Day #27 - Mother Wound )
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Really need to buckle down if I'm going to finish by the end of the month. Here's a bit of Skin Deep that occurs sometimes after #17 - Nothing Else to You when Allie figures out what's going on with Juliana and resolves to look into exposing Resurgemus.

( Day #26 - Nobody Knows Anything )
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Very annoyed with how much trouble I'm having writing these days. The head is just not in the game. But here's something for Skin Deep, my feminist aging horror, that actually makes a bit of progress. I haven't fully developed the idea in this one-- I want to depict the world and system this story happens in as unequivocally messed-up, but still with some subtlety. I think right now this piece is neither creepy enough nor subtle enough. But I can probably do some refining form here.

( Day #15 - Mutual Admiration )
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Damn, I hadn't realized how long it's been since I wrote a Text from Avengers Tower. It's far and away the most read thing I've ever written, so I was quite into it for a while. I might push on a few more, since they tend to be quick and cute, and I still need to catch the hell up before the month ends.

This one comes from Thunderbolts*, and was inspired by a joke made at dinner with Naomi and Pieter.

( Day #24 - Family Game Night )
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Another piece from Lacuna. Not sure where it exactly it falls. I like the idea of it, but it's inelegantly expressed and not fully developed. But it's something.

( Day #23 - Discord )
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Another Little Monsters idea, though not a very good one. I'm also not sure how I'd shoot it, as it would require a fair bit in the way of "special effects." But it's something as I'm trying to catch up.

( Day #22 - Not For the Eyes of Man )
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Ugghhhhhh, I am SO behind. Many days behind. A combination of family obligations and health issue relapse killed my productivity for the last several days... almost a week. UGH. I have had a hard enough time writing during this year's challenge so far; catching back up is going to be a nightmare.

Whatever. Suck it up and work, buttercup. Here's another scene from Lacuna. Don't like it, don't think it does enough, but whatever. GOT TO WRITE.

( Day #20 - Found )
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I wasn't sure if I was going to adapt this part of The Purity of the Turf story, but I was a bit stuck after a long busy day, so I gave it a shot just to write something. Who knows, maybe I'll use it; there's some funny stuff in there. But it introduces a character very late and for only a single scene, which is awkward craft-wise. I also don't know if I want Lady Wickhammersley to be as credulous as she's written here. I may need to sub in a different character for her role in the scene. But we'll have to see how it fits in to the larger plan.

( Day #19 - Shattered Egg and Dreams )
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A bit of connective logical tissue for "The Purity of the Turf." It falls between #14 - Unprepossessing Ovoid and #12 - Nobbling. This sort of thing is always awkward to draft, because it has to be functional for the plot, but also you have to find some way to make it interesting, and in this case, funny.

ALSO I LOVE THE NAME "STEGGLES" AND WANT TO MAKE PEOPLE SAY IT A LOT. One of the great pleasures of being a writer is choosing hilarious names for your characters and making your actors say them out loud.

( Day #18 - Collecting Donations )
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Rushed, sloppy, but there's an idea to this. Another piece for my feminist aging horror Skin Deep, following after #4 - To Stagger the Unbelief of Satan. I think if I polish this up, it could be pretty impactful.

( Day #17 - Nothing Else to You )
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NOT FEELING IT, BLEH. But here's some more Jeeves and Wooster mess, following #15 - "Choirboy". WILL FIX LATER. FOR NOW, POST.

( Day #16 - Mustard Gas )
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Sloppy and rushed, but who cares! I'm caught up again at last!

Another section of "The Purity of the Turf," occurring somewhere after #12 - "Nobbling". I like the gist of this, which adapts a slightly awkward section of the story pretty cleanly in terms of keeping too many extraneous characters out of it. But I definitely pushed through it too fast to finish, so it doesn't flow and needs punching up. And I am definitely going to have to figure out how to deal with the cast size and gender balance. But for now, whatever, who cares! I am back on track for the challenge!

( Day #15 - Choirboy )
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Okay, I confess I kind of like this one. Another for the Jeeves and Wooster adaptation "The Purity of the Turf", immediately following #9 - A Beautiful Egg. I feel like this one makes functional, structural sense as well as being actually funny.

It's nice to feel like a scene actually came out okay for once this month.

( Day #14 - Unprepossessing Ovoid )

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