ext_39553 ([identity profile] redfishie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] breakinglight11 2015-06-02 11:33 am (UTC)

That's how I read it as well. They like your concept and characters but there isn't enough zing to the story or an angle they can market easily from.

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