Biweekly Theater Writing Challenge #6 - Subtext scene, Mk2

So in my first packet of playwrighting assignments, I had to write a scene that was supposed to be an exercise in writing subtext. What I generated wasn't really subtext at all, so my teacher made me do it again. This is what I wrote for the second try. I'm afraid its' still not subtext, but maybe I'm at least a little bit closer.

( Apparently I am very, very unsubtle... )