Aug. 10th, 2019

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This scene piece immediately follows yesterday's Day #9 - "A Ruin". I feel like this part came out okay, like it gets mostly at what I want it to get at. The thing I like best is that it allows Nathaniel to reference something difficult and important Mrs. Frost told him in a manner that is fairly clear but also not explicit. It's too uncomfortable for him to say directly— and I kind of love the idea that Mrs. Hawking is like, "Wait, what the fuck did she tell him? What does he know?" —but I think the audience can get it.

I'm also chopping up these scenes a little more tightly than I usually do, to stretch them over the month. There's a lot in this piece I do not want to spoil.

Photo by Daniel Fox


Day #10 - Poison )

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