Oct. 9th, 2020

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October Review Challenge, #9 - "What was a moment in your work that was difficult to write?"

I’d love to talk about something that was, like, emotionally difficult for me, like I was writing something that was deeply challenging or personal that made it hard to get out. But honestly the thing that I struggled to get on paper the most was purely a functional challenge. Hands down, the most torturous process to generate in recent memory is the back half of scene 2.1 of Mrs. Hawking part V: Mrs. Frost, where the four women finally work together to solve the problem with the titular villain.

Are we to do this?


I AGONIZED over this. It involved one of the challenges of doing complicated capers and schemes, where you need complicated problems and very clever solutions, devised by people who are probably supposed to be smarter than you, the writer. Pacing and drama must be taken into account, so things must unfold at a good clip with the appropriate sense of escalation. That is REALLY hard. And in this case, I had to distribute the development of their plan over two scenes, beginning in 1.8 where the women first attempt to come together but find their personality conflicts getting in the way. Figuring out where each piece of information, idea, and brainwave should be was brutally difficult, particularly when I was invested in every character in the scene— Mrs. Hawking, Mary, Madam Malaika, and Clara —each making equally meaningful contributions in their own way, based on their own skillset. Bernie and I got into some pretty serious conflicts over what was revealing too much too soon, and how to best solve those issues.

I avoided finishing 2.1 for DAYS, and it was the last scene of all of them to be drafted. When it got to the point where I just had to get something on paper, it was banged out practically weeping and wailing as I rolled around under a table at a classroom at Lesley. That’s not an exaggeration, I was literally flopping on the ground under the table because I was feeling so avoidant. But I dragged it out to complete the thing.

And, as often is the case, it wasn’t as bad as I thought it would be. It needed some cleaning up, and there was a bit at the very end that over-explained way, way too much— I remember that bit survived three revisions, but when I finally cut it the whole thing felt much sleeker. But it ultimately worked. I’ve actually had a couple people tell me that these “ladies working together” scenes are their favorite part of the play. Not something I would have imagined rolling around under that table.

The moral is— GET IT OUT ON PAPER. It will at least be fixable, even if it isn’t perfect. And it’s definitely better than when it doesn’t exist!
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DREAM MACHINE
The 1-Hour Comedy by Phoebe Roberts and Bernie Gabin

What if you let Phoebe do her own version of 30 Rock, and they made a parody of Outlander? You get DREAM MACHINE, a Zoom staged reading in a time of quarantine

Episode 4 - “The Opposite of People“



It’s time to start casting for Offcomer, the new flagship show at Dream Machine, and Leah’s excited, even though she’s not quite ready with the pilot script. But while she likes a charismatic young actor who has emerged for the male lead, Meredith is adamant that they ought to capitalize on the popularity of their previous show’s lead Devon. Meanwhile, Josie is having trouble getting a handle on her own role, so she’ll have to gather her courage to make the stubborn show runner figure out a direction.

Starring
Naomi Floro as Leah
Liz Salazar as Meredith
Eric Cheung as Ryan / Actor 1 / Narrator
Cari Keebaugh as Josie
Matthew Kamm as Derek / Actor 3 / Narrator
Jason Tilton as Devon / Narrator
Sarah Parisi Boçi as Kristen / Park Mom
Pieter Wallace as Actor 2 / Narrator
and Andrew Winson as Tom / Narrator

Content notes: mild sexuality, mentions of body shaming, sexual objectification of men

Catch up on previous episodes:
Episode 1: "The Show Must Go Off"
Episode 2: “Requiem for a Dreamer”
Episode 3: “Change or Die"

This has been a Breaking Light Production

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