*Very* neat, and I think this has some serious potential.
My only concern is balancing the Whisper, such that the listener can hear it and has a chance of understanding it, without making the main dialogue come across as stilted. But if that can work, I think this would be wonderfully atmospheric...
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Date: 2020-02-05 06:59 pm (UTC)My only concern is balancing the Whisper, such that the listener can hear it and has a chance of understanding it, without making the main dialogue come across as stilted. But if that can work, I think this would be wonderfully atmospheric...