Nov. 4th, 2011

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Well, it's getting to be greater than biweekly, isn't it? Good for me. Of course I've got to hand in a draft of my one-act this coming week, so I hardly have the time to wait for biweekly! Anyway, here's another scene from the hospital family drama I'm calling The Waiting Room. It's another flashback with the girl Helen (who's having the baby in the present) picking up her younger sister Margaret after doing something stupid lands her in the hospital. It's intended to illustrate how Margaret resents how perfect Helen is and how she never gets into trouble, which in the present gives her a conflict over feeling vindicated that Helen has finally screwed up but feeling guilty that she thinks that while Helen's in such dire straits.

I think I got the voices down a little more distinctly here... )

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