Biweekly Theater Writing Challenge #16: The Tailor of Riddling Way, Episode 3: What She Started

So off and on I've been working on back-engineering the script for the Tailor audio drama from the first draft of the Tailor screenplay I wrote for last semester. I think I have finished at least a first draft of the third installment, which I'm calling What She Started. Every installment has been a little bit shorter than the previous one, which I'm a bit concerned about, but maybe it doesn't really matter as long as the break points make sense. There will probably be one more episode after this to conclude the story.

If you read the screenplay, it's very similar but visual things are translated more into dialogue here. Instead of the viewer simply seeing a dusty bookshelf of classical texts in one corner of the bedroom, Tom comments on it here. I confess I am a little dissastisfied that I haven't managed to fix certain things about the story that my teacher pointed out. Like, for example, he thinks I should have Officer Crier appear again before the very end, so this episode would be the one for it. But I still haven't figured out how to make him come back. So this script will likely need editing from the version below. If anyone has any suggestions, please let me know. This is something I will definitely need for the second draft of the screenplay, and I think it would improve the audio drama as well.

( Episode 3: What She Started )