31 Plays in 31 Days, #20 - "Until the Bell Rings"

The last part of the opening scene of Mrs. Frost. It comes immediately after yesterday's Day #19 - "Time and Strife", which in turn continues from Day #20 - "Disguise". I think I feel a little better about this part than I did when I posted yesterday's, but I can't shake the feeling that I'm either repeating myself, being too obvious, or not hitting the real point. I guess that's normal for a first draft. But as is so often the case, I feel like I know what I OUGHT to be saying, but can't figure out how to say it. It's hard to foreshadow without spoiling, it's hard to be clear without being too obvious or repetitious, and it's hard to be focused without giving away the game.

But that's what second drafts are for.

( Day #20 - Until the Bell Rings )