Aug. 19th, 2018

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Garbage. Awkward, unspecific garbage that I've been banging at for like three days and I still hate it. It follows immediately after Day #16 - "Disguise", and it suffers from the same issue I had with that one of not knowing how to convey the important backstory the audience needs to know, without drowning them in details or making the characters say things they'd never naturalistically say. Thinking now, I have struggled with the scene where "the current state of things" is articulated in parts III and IV as well— that ended up being a slog to write that I left until almost last both previous times as well.

Day #19 - Time and Strife )

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