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Went to the beach with lovely people yesterday, and had a lovely time but got nothing done. So I have to play catch up today— particularly with finalizing the syllabus for a class I’ve never taught before, so I’m basically making it from scratch. That’s a lot of work.
But I’m also trying to edit and expand the script for Mrs. Hawking 1, including to fix some of the logical flow problems I’m no longer satisfied with. That’s also what I was attempting with #24 - The Good Nephew. Here’s a scene I’d like to add that reshapes Mary’s struggle to fit in before Mrs. Hawking lets her into her secret, and the mechanics of how Mary becomes aware of her work and ultimately understands her well enough to figure out how she can help on the current mission.
( Day #24 - The Sixth Girl )
But I’m also trying to edit and expand the script for Mrs. Hawking 1, including to fix some of the logical flow problems I’m no longer satisfied with. That’s also what I was attempting with #24 - The Good Nephew. Here’s a scene I’d like to add that reshapes Mary’s struggle to fit in before Mrs. Hawking lets her into her secret, and the mechanics of how Mary becomes aware of her work and ultimately understands her well enough to figure out how she can help on the current mission.
( Day #24 - The Sixth Girl )
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