Taking a little break from posting scenes from my Wicker Man remake, since I'm trying to do that one in sequence and I'm currently working on a scene I'm struggling to hammer out a bit. This is going back to Lacuna, which is coming out very out of order like most of my writing does, and tries to expand on a theme I'm trying to include as character work.
Day #22 - “Broke Up”
From Lacuna
By Phoebe Roberts
CHEMICAL GOTHIC, Joan Kirby, a gamer
PASCALESBUST, Michael Lister, a gamer and her friend
On the Internet, in the present day
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CHEM: Why are you so fixated on this game?
PASCALE: I… I really don’t know. But I can’t get it out of my head. Can’t let go of something I can’t figure out, I guess.
CHEM: That makes sense. Well, we’ll give it a shot this weekend. If Kara doesn’t mind me keeping you in on a Friday night.
PASCALE: Heh. Kara doesn’t get a vote about it.
CHEM: What? Why? Is something up with Kara?
(Pause.)
PASCALE: I wouldn’t know.
CHEM: What? What do you mean—? Oh.
PASCALE: Yeah.
CHEM: Jesus. I’m so sorry. What happened?
PASCALE: We broke up. And by “we broke up,” I mean, she broke up and I no longer had any input on the matter.
CHEM: That’s awful. When did it happen?
PASCALE: It was months ago now.
CHEM: Oh, damn. I didn’t know.
PASCALE: Well. I didn’t really want to talk about it.
(Pause.)
CHEM: Well… how about now?
PASCALE: What?
CHEM: If you could use an ear. I’ll listen.
PASCALE: Why would you want to do that?
CHEM: Well. Because we’re friends. Aren’t we?
(Pause.)
PASCALE: I don’t know, man. Suddenly I couldn’t do anything right. Everything about me became a problem. And nothing I did to fix it seemed to matter.
CHEM: Wow. That sounds really hard.
PASCALE: Yeah. It was.
CHEM: Do you… do you know what changed?
PASCALE: As far as I could tell, nothing! Nothing changed. That’s what was so fucked.
CHEM: Well, what did she say?
PASCALE: Oh, you know. That I’m a selfish asshole, that I don’t pay enough attention. The standard stuff when a woman decides she hates you and wants to make sure you know it.
CHEM: Hey, easy there, pal.
PASCALE: Ugh, never mind. Knew I shouldn’t be talking about it. It just sucks, is all.
CHEM: Well, I’m sorry you’re hurting.
PASCALE: Oh, come on.
CHEM: I am. I really am.
PASCALE: Thanks. That’s nice of you.
CHEM: Like I said. I’m your friend.
PASCALE: Well. I’ll see you this weekend.
CHEM: Yeah. See you then.
Day #22 - “Broke Up”
From Lacuna
By Phoebe Roberts
CHEMICAL GOTHIC, Joan Kirby, a gamer
PASCALESBUST, Michael Lister, a gamer and her friend
On the Internet, in the present day
~~~~
CHEM: Why are you so fixated on this game?
PASCALE: I… I really don’t know. But I can’t get it out of my head. Can’t let go of something I can’t figure out, I guess.
CHEM: That makes sense. Well, we’ll give it a shot this weekend. If Kara doesn’t mind me keeping you in on a Friday night.
PASCALE: Heh. Kara doesn’t get a vote about it.
CHEM: What? Why? Is something up with Kara?
(Pause.)
PASCALE: I wouldn’t know.
CHEM: What? What do you mean—? Oh.
PASCALE: Yeah.
CHEM: Jesus. I’m so sorry. What happened?
PASCALE: We broke up. And by “we broke up,” I mean, she broke up and I no longer had any input on the matter.
CHEM: That’s awful. When did it happen?
PASCALE: It was months ago now.
CHEM: Oh, damn. I didn’t know.
PASCALE: Well. I didn’t really want to talk about it.
(Pause.)
CHEM: Well… how about now?
PASCALE: What?
CHEM: If you could use an ear. I’ll listen.
PASCALE: Why would you want to do that?
CHEM: Well. Because we’re friends. Aren’t we?
(Pause.)
PASCALE: I don’t know, man. Suddenly I couldn’t do anything right. Everything about me became a problem. And nothing I did to fix it seemed to matter.
CHEM: Wow. That sounds really hard.
PASCALE: Yeah. It was.
CHEM: Do you… do you know what changed?
PASCALE: As far as I could tell, nothing! Nothing changed. That’s what was so fucked.
CHEM: Well, what did she say?
PASCALE: Oh, you know. That I’m a selfish asshole, that I don’t pay enough attention. The standard stuff when a woman decides she hates you and wants to make sure you know it.
CHEM: Hey, easy there, pal.
PASCALE: Ugh, never mind. Knew I shouldn’t be talking about it. It just sucks, is all.
CHEM: Well, I’m sorry you’re hurting.
PASCALE: Oh, come on.
CHEM: I am. I really am.
PASCALE: Thanks. That’s nice of you.
CHEM: Like I said. I’m your friend.
PASCALE: Well. I’ll see you this weekend.
CHEM: Yeah. See you then.