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As I have occasionally mentioned before on this blog, I don't think I'm the most talented when it comes to writing comedy. I like to think of myself as a fairly witty person, who can make you laugh with a clever remark in conversation now and again. But when it comes to coming up with real jokes or funny lines, that's more the province of other writers. In my writing program, I thought of genuinely funny stuff as much more the province of my friend and boss Bill Pendergast, or how Julie Weinberg had such a knack for dark comedy.

Still, I certainly enjoy it for its own sake, but even moreso, I like it as a way to add balance and lightness to a heavier narrative. I've always felt that even really serious drama needs something to keep it from going into the territory of "grimdark." So, even though it's not always easy for me, I am endeavoring to get better at it so that I can effectively include it in my own work.

My favorite comedy of all time is probably Frasier, which I thought managed to be extremely funny while still maintaining a level of intellectualism, narrative and character integrity, and did not resort to tired or offensive stereotyping in jokes. I'm very inspired by the style of comedy therein with its level of wit and cleverness. I've also been watching Cheers, which happens to be the series from which Frasier spun off, and is considered to be a required text for anyone who hopes to write comedy. Honestly I find Cheers to be a bit dated and not nearly as funny as Frasier, nor does it have anywhere near the dramatic integrity, but it has a heart and charm to it that inspired countless humor pieces that came after it. I'm hoping to learn from examples like these.

The funniest thing I ever wrote is probably The Late Mrs. Chadwick, my most performed ten-minute play. The main joke, the resolute refusal to compromise stiff-upper-lip British manners, is one that plays to my strengths. I was pleased to find at the recent staged reading of Vivat Regina that pretty much all the jokes played, and in fact were some of the audience's favorite parts of the piece.

Most recently I've been working on a silly little side project, a fan fiction for Cabin Pressure, a BBC radio comedy that I find extremely funny. I started it just to have a little low-pressure positive feedback on something, and I'm determined not to stress about it, but I have been making an effort to make it not only funny, but as much in the style of the source material as possible. It has a particular kind of dry British humor that is very distinctive. I do find myself struggling to come up with bits and gags. I'm positive it's not as funny as any of the originals, but I do think I've managed to capture the characters' unique voices. Some commenters have even said things to that effect; my favorite so far was the one who said if the creator John Finnemore retired, they'd tune in if I were the replacement! :-) That's encouraging. But I know I still need more practice. Like any aspect of writing, you got to put in the work!
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The mysterious client in Vivat Regina is clearly not who she says she is. But what is the real identity of the woman who introduces herself with "You may address me as Mrs. Johanna Braun"? Those interested in Victorian history may be amused to know!

Read the rest of the entry on Mrshawking.com!
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"What I learned from the Vivat Regina reading"

I was extremely pleased with how the staged reading of Vivat Regina went this past Thursday. My actors did such a wonderful job bringing the story to life, I couldn’t have been happier with the representation of my work.

Readings should not only exhibit a piece, they should also teach you something about it as its writer. What jumped out at me in this more than anything else was that people responded to the humor of it.

Read the rest of the entry on Mrshawking.com!
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Tonight is our one-night-only staged reading of Vivat Regina at Bare Bones with Theater at First!

Last night we held our final rehearsal, which I am pleased to report went well. That was the first time we were able to run through the whole play in its entirety, and it was fascinating to see how the cast used it to carry them through their arcs. More than the original, this is a piece where each scene builds upon the scenes that came before it. It builds up a real momentum that way, where the personal moments and the plot of the caper weave in an out of each other toward their conclusion. I was very proud of the actors for using it to give each character's story a trajectory. It's challenging, too, to convey the sense of action and adventure when it's only a reading, but the narrators reading the stage directions do a phenomenal job telling that part of the story. I think it's very exciting, even without all the visuals, and I hope you will too.



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So please join us tonight! Come to Unity Somerville at 6 William Street in Somerville, MA at 8pm tonight, October 2nd. Admission is free, but donations are gladly accepted to support Theatre@First.
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"Meet Elizabeth Hunter, voice of Victoria Hawking in Bare Bones"

Here is a video of Elizabeth talking about the character she plays in the upcoming staged reading of Vivat Regina with Bare Bones.

See the video here!

Join us for the reading at 8PM on Thursday, October 2nd at Unity Somerville at 6 William St, Somerville, MA. Admission is free and donations go to support Theatre@First.

Also, Mrs. Hawking now has a fan page on Facebook. I know Facebook is super annoying and all, but it may have come in handy later if I have a quantifiable metric of people who enjoy the property, so if you wouldn't mind liking the page, I'd be very grateful. :-)
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"Rewards and challenges of serialized drama."

The reading of Vivat Regina this October marks the first time a sequel has been performed as part of the Bare Bones reading series. Sequels are somewhat rate in theatrical drama, but a story like Mrs. Hawking’s has so much long-term potential that it could hardly be told any other way.

In writing Vivat Regina, one thing was certain— the challenge was how the piece had to stand up on its own, even if you had no knowledge of the original. But there’s also lot of benefits to come from being able to tell multiple stories.

Read the rest of the entry on the website!

And be sure to join us for the Vivat Regina staged reading at 8PM on Thursday, October 2nd at Unity Somerville at 6 William Street, Somerville, MA.
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"Meet Gabrielle Geller, voice of Mary Stone in Bare Bones!"

I recorded a video interview with Gabrielle talking about the character she plays in the upcoming staged reading of Vivat Regina with Bare Bones.

See the video here!

And join us for the reading at 8PM on Thursday, October 2nd at Unity Somerville at 6 William St, Somerville, MA. Admission is free and donations go to support Theatre@First.
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I am pleased to announce that we have a cast for the staged reading of Vivat Regina at Bare Bones with Theatre@First!


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As I mentioned, the three talented people playing Mrs. Hawking, Mary, and Nathaniel in last year's Bare Bones reading of the original play were kind enough to agree to return. I am delighted to have Elizabeth Hunter, Gabrielle Geller, and Ryan Kacani reading again. But that meant I still had three other people to choose!

This audition process was even tougher than it was last year; I was very fortunate to have a nice selection of talented people, but sadly that meant there were more people I enjoyed than I could possibly use. It's always sad when you don't have enough space for someone who gives a good reading and whom you'd be happy to work. I feel very grateful so many people were willing to share their talent with me to put on this piece. Thank you so much to everyone who auditioned; I really wished I had more roles.

The cast I finally settled on is a follows:

Mrs. Victoria Hawking - Elizabeth Hunter
Miss Mary Stone - Gabrielle Geller
Mr. Nathaniel Hawking - Ryan Kacani
Mrs. Johanna Braun / Frau Kirsten Gerhard / Narrator #3 - Joye Thaller
Mrs. Clara Hawking / Narrator #2 - Samantha LeVangie
Mr. Arthur Swann / Narrator #1 - Matthew Kamm

I am very excited to work with every one of them.

I hope you'll all come out to see this very talented cast read Vivat Regina on Thursday, October 2nd at 8PM at Unity Somerville at 6 William Street, Somerville, MA.
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After an intense week helping Bernie move, and a day or two catching up on some pressing chores of my own that had fallen by the wayside, I think I’m finally more or less caught back up. Now it’s time to return to project work.

I also finished 31 Plays in 31 Days for the third year in a row. I was very happy with my output, and I will do a post reflecting on the direction I took this year tomorrow. Now I’m working on draft five of Puzzle House Blues. My goal is to have it complete by the end of this week, though that may be a bit of an ambitious proposition.

Tonight I am auditioning people for the Bare Bones staged reading of Vivat Regina. I look forward to filling out the cast, in addition to my lovely returning actors. It was really fun the first time around, so I’m excited to do the next story. This week I will also make sure the script to Vivat Regina is in proper shape, and then we’ll begin rehearsing. :-)
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Vivat Regina, the second installment in the Mrs. Hawking series, is going to be having a staged reading with Bare Bones, the reading series hosted by Somerville, MA theater troupe Theatre@First!


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Bare Bones previously hosted a reading of the original Mrs. Hawking in April of 2013, which was performed to great success. I'm very fortunate that the excellent actors who portrayed the three leads, Elizabeth Hunter as Mrs. Hawking, Gabrielle Geller as Mary, and Ryan Kacani as Nathaniel, have all agreed to return to play their characters again in the reading of the sequel. I'm so excited to work with them again!

Auditions for the remaining roles will be held on Tuesday, September 2nd at Unity Somerville at 6 William Street, Somerville, MA. I will be looking for one man to read for Arthur Swann and two women, one for Clara Hawking and one to be double-cast as Mrs. Braun and Frau Gerhard. The ability to do a German accent would be welcome for the latter actress but is not required. Any interested parties are welcome and encouraged to try out!

If you're interested in coming out, please go to the Bare Bones website for relevant information and how to sign up for an appointment!

The reading will be held one night only, on Thursday, October 2nd at 8PM at Unity Somerville. Admission is free but there is a $5 suggested donation to support Theatre@First.

For more information about the piece, be sure to check out the Vivat Regina tag on Mrshawking.com.
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I have so many writing projects that I need to accomplish in the near future, and I find it helpful to lay out a plan and prioritize so I know what to focus on. So here’s what I’m thinking, at least for the next two months or so.

I have plunged into draft 4 of the new musical, Puzzle House Blues. I am making the last round of edits to the text before I arrange a second reading. Troy has made excellent progress on the composition of music and lyrics for the songs, for which I am providing some editorial input. I expect all of that to get finished in the next few weeks. Then we’ll have to make rough song recordings so we can play them to our readers, to enable them to get the full narrative effect.

The other major thing I have to work on immediately is my new screenplay, intended to enter into this year’s Big Break Screenwriting Contest. I made it into the top ten percent of all entries last year with The Tailor at Loring’s End, so I want to have something to enter this year as well. I have yet to talk about that piece here on the blog, but now’s a good a time to introduce it as any. It’s a little tough to explain, but it’s a sort of a feminist creative experiment. I wanted to take a set of gendered tropes, roles, and power dynamics and fill them with members of a different gender than the ones we’re conditioned to expect. The aim is to highlight the existence of those tropes by taking them out of the gender contexts we’re accustomed to so that familiarity does not permit us to ignore them. Basically, it’s an epic set in an alternate history with a matriarchal Ancient Rome, where an exalted female general challenges the empire when she falls in love with a beautiful male slave-turned-gladiator. I am calling it Adonis, and it will involve certain things that I’m not used to writing about, but I think it has the potential to be a really powerful story. The draft’s about thirty percent done at this point, and needs to be ready for a submission deadline at the end of July.

Lastly, when August comes around again, I would like to again participate in 31 Plays in 31 Days, where you write a play of at least one page in length for every day of the month of August. It has done wonders for my productivity in the past, giving me lots of great short pieces and even chunks of larger scripts that I otherwise would not have written. So I’m excited to do it again. Last year, I mostly produced the latter, many of which would later become the meat of Vivat Regina, the second Mrs. Hawking story. I would love to get a start on the as-yet-untitled third installment the same way, although any new writing I produce during that time would be welcome.
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Notes on Vivat Regina: plot

Warning: spoilers contained herein for Vivat Regina.

In addition to character arcs, it needed an over-plot to give it structure, a mission for them to go on as part of Mrs. Hawking's work. The idea for this one sprung out of the notion I had of a recognizable figure from this part of Victorian history coming incognito to the ladies to ask for their help. This figure is embodied in Mrs. Braun, who it is clear is not using her real name.

Read the rest of this entry on the website!
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As you may have gleaned from reading Vivat Regina, I want to explore the idea of a relationship between Mary and Arthur Swann, the police officer she meets (and makes use of) in that play. All I wanted to do in that story was start a connection, but that meant I had to take care to get it off on the right foot.

Read more of "Sparking a romance" on the website.

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New blog entry on www.mrshawking.com!

I’ve talked a fair bit in this space about my intentions for the character arcs in Vivat Regina– chiefly, that I wanted Mrs. Hawking to decide that she will make Mary her protege, and that Nathaniel is going to come into his own way of being of help to our heroes.

Read more in "Notes on Vivat Regina: character arcs"
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The second installment of the Mrs. Hawking story, Vivat Regina, is now available here on the site for viewing! Click here to read it in the Scripts section of Mrshawking.com.

The official synopsis:

Mary Stone is doing her best learn the trade of her mistress's work as a covert agent for women victimized by Victorian society. Mrs. Hawking's nephew Nathaniel, too, struggles to find what contribution he can make to his aunt's work, and neither one seems to be serving to their mentor's satisfaction. But when a mysterious lady under a false name comes to them with a next-to-impossible mission, Mrs. Hawking and her assistants must bring together all their varied strengths in order to see that justice is done.

Significant input on the plot was provided by Bernie Gabin to my gratitude. I also owe a great deal to Gabrielle Geller, Ben Federlin, Aaron Fischer, Ryan Kacani, Stephanie Karol, Frances Kimpel, Samantha LeVangie, Charlotte Oswald, Eboracum Richter-Dahl, and Lenny Somervell for their reading and feedback on this script. Their input was crucial to the editing process.

It takes place about nine months or so after the events of Mrs. Hawking, in the summer of 1881.

All related posts on the topic of Vivat Regina can be found in this category.

I hope you enjoy it. All comments, questions, and responses to the piece are very welcome.

Read the new script Vivat Regina here.

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Been thinking about mrshawking.com lately, and wondering whether or not to post Vivat Regina, the second Mrs. Hawking story and most recently finished script. Vivat Regina is in about its fourth revision at this point and is pretty solid, so it could go up. I like the idea of showing solid evidence of its serial nature as well.

There's only thing that gives me pause, and I'm not certain it's worth worrying over. Ideally, I would like to have a public reading of it sometime in the near future. I submitted it for consideration for Theater@First's Bare Bones reading series in the most recent round, which you may remember held a reading of the original Mrs. Hawking in April of last year. I would really love it if it gets accepted this time, as I'd love to have that event to stimulate interest in the property, especially since I can direct people to the website now.

My thought had been to post the script right after the reading happened-- so as, I suppose, not to spoil it for the general public before then. But I'm not sure if that really matters one way or the other. People reading it might not necessarily mean they won't be interested in hearing a staged reading of it. And of course it might not get accepted at Bare Bones. It's probably not a good idea to delay indefinitely if there won't be a reading any time soon. I should get it up there, for proof of the serial concept, to enrich the website, and to allow people who might be interested in it to read it. But if maybe by good fortune I do get to put it up with the next Bare Bones, I should just wait until after then? So maybe wait for the results and find out if I got in and then decide?

That's probably what I'll do. It probably won't hurt either way. Just want to do the best by the project, and struggling to really know what that is.

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This past week I had some of my pool of acting talent test out the Clara subplot I wrote for Vivat Regina. I was not feeling very good about it going in. I struggled a lot with not only figuring out why she would appear, what she would add to the story, but also where the hell to put here. It seemed like there was no place to break up the already-established plot structure that didn't bring the moment to a halt. But I gave it my best shot, and threw it to the actors to see what they would do with it.

The verdict they came to was that it worked a lot better than I thought! They actually loved the character of Clara, and said she added both a spot of humor and the presence of someone who has not drunk the Mrs. Hawking Kool-Aid, so to speak. One thing that really bugs me is when a character is an asshole but none of the other characters ever give them any consequences for it because they're soooooooo special. I wanted Clara to be somebody who was not so impressed by Mrs. Hawking-- who is both definitely very cool, and very much a pain in the ass --that she wouldn't validate everything she does. I was happy to hear she achieved that.

There were still problems, though. Some of the insertion points for Clara's scenes were off, and she wasn't doing everything she could to serve the overall story. But the wonderful thing was that my lovely actors all had ideas to fix it. A little bit of each one's thoughts combined to show me what I could do to make her work better. I think it's incredibly cool that now each of them have their fingerprint on it. I'm so grateful for their help. I'm lucky to have such talented friends, who are generous with their talent.

I've been working on the edit since then. I should have it done very soon. I'm extremely happy that it worked out, because the idea does enrich the story. Yay for progress!

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Today is my first early day of work that wasn't canceled for snow. I prefer the early shift in general, but it will take a bit of adjustment as I haven't had to be in by 8:30 for quite a while. As a morning person, I think ending my workday earlier will make me feel less exhausted by the time I get home, which will enable me to make better use of my evenings. Of course, like an idiot, I forgot my lunch on my way out the door, which is not a great way to begin, but I'll have to get in better habits from here on.

I am making a serious go on the Vivat Regina subplot containing Clara. I'm not a hundred percent sure that it will work, which is making it a bit tough to commit to it. But I'm telling myself that if it doesn't end up improving or fitting within the piece, I can always just go back to the previous draft, so I won't lose anything but the effort. Much as I admittedly hate wasted effort-- likely a holdover from my depressed days when I had to seriously ration my energy --I really do want to give it a try and see if I can make it work.

Also going to have to begin working on the script and lyrics for the new 20s-era musical I'm co-authoring. That presents a really new challenge for me. Poetry is not my forte, and I've certainly never attempted to write it in such as way as it could be set to a song. In some cases my awesome collaborator Troy has already worked out what the music will sound like, and we'll be writing the words with that in mind, but in other cases we've decided it's best to write the words first. I'm excited to try, but also nervous. I want to do well. A piece like this is really made or broken by its songs, and good lyrics will really do a lot to see that the songs are good. I hope I'm up to the task. It's probably going to be a matter of brainstorming, giving it a shot, and then revising endlessly to get it to where it should be. Like any writing task, I suppose. Here goes nothing!
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In the very early planning stages of Vivat Regina, the second installment of the Mrs. Hawking story, I wrote a bit of Nathaniel’s wife Clara with the vague notion that she could be included. The very first thing I ever wrote of her was a monologue where she, under the guise of perfect friendly politeness, needled Mrs. Hawking for what a pain she is. It’s a pretty funny piece, and I’d like to use it in some form. But this, nor anything else with her, ended up making it into the first draft of the script.

However, after having put together a draft of Vivat Regina, I find it’s somewhat in need of a subplot. In its current state, it pushes along the course of the plot pretty unrelentingly, which is a fairly typical problem my work tends to have, at least in the early drafts. I find myself struggling to figure out exactly what would be the appropriate extra thread. But I suppose the obvious thing to include is Clara.

More at "How to introduce Clara" on the website.

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I am at home in Pennsylvania this week to celebrate Christmas with my family. It is lovely to be hear, and we spent a low-key day today hanging out and cooking. We made our Italian seven-fish dinner, including cheats like shrimp, smoked salmon, crab cake, fried calamari, and our special lobster bisque that we make every year. It's our way of enjoying each other's company and being together, and I like it.

So, after a week of mystery and obfuscation, I'm finally going to tell you about my recent new play. The piece I've been working on is Vivat Regina, the first sequel to Mrs. Hawking. I was rushing to get the first draft at least done this past week because I wanted to submit it in time for the first deadline for Bare Bones, the reading series done by Theatre@First. The first Mrs. Hawking had a reading there to great success, so I thought it would be a good place for the next one as well. Some people at the reading's talkback afterward even wanted to know if there would be sequels, so I think it would be likely to gather an interested audience. I even wanted to have back the three lead actors, Elizabeth Hunter, Gigi Geller, and Ryan Kacani, back to play the recurring characters of Mrs. Hawking, Mary, and Nathaniel.

I was able to get Vivat Regina done to decent results and sent it in, but sadly it was not accepted for the upcoming date. Still, John Deschene, the excellent fellow in charge of the reading series, strongly encouraged me to submit it again, so I think I have a good chance to get chosen later this year. It's by no means the end of the world, but I won't lie, I'm a bit disappointed. I really wanted to get this piece out there sooner rather than later. I mean, I could arrange to have a reading of it myself, but Theatre@First has a sizable audience base that I don't have access to that would come out if it were a Bare Bones reading but not otherwise. I've been struggling to find a good way to get people to go to the Mrs. Hawking website, so its audience base might expand, and I thought directing people who just heard a new reading to it would give it an infusion of interest. It can still do that if I get it accepted with Bare Bones at a later date, but that will be a ways off yet.

This might ultimately be a good thing. I will have plenty of time to edit the script, which, as I mentioned, is still in need of a decent subplot to pad out the length a bit. Maybe with a bit more warning I can ensure I can get Elizabeth, Gigi, and Ryan back, if they are interested and available. I'm kind of bummed about it right now, but ultimately this could be just as well.

If you are interested in reading this early draft and giving an opinion, feel free to let me know, and I will send along a copy of the script. I'd be happy to get new eyes and new opinions, and of course just spread the thing around.

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