Lame Swans, the Graphic Novel - Scene 2 - "Cast"

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Lame Swans
by Phoebe Roberts

Scene 1 - "The Lake"

Scene 2
"Cast"

End of Scene 2 - "Cast"

Starring
Carolyn Daitch as Lise
Caitlin Partridge as Joanna
Aoi Tori as Marina
Bernie Gabin as Jason
Jonathan Kindness as Bryce
Charlotte Oswald as Jessica
Ryan Kacani as Chad

with
Photography Assistance by Stephanie Karol
Hair and Makeup by Gabrielle Geller

Continue to Scene 3 - "Down"

Comments

[laurion]

I like the editing work here, the softening in the remembered scenes is very effective, and the different word balloons, especially. Also digging the continued color schemes for characters, into the different styles of clothes (although the solid color and bluejeans combo comes across like they're all in a uniform. Is that intentional?).

And oh wow, do you have some expressive faces here. Kudos (especially to Carolyn) for the amazing range of faces here. I like to think that Lise has a nervous compulsive need to put her hand on the back of her head when she's worried. It's almost glued there in parts of these scenes.

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Thank you! I appreciate you looking so closely. I liked the idea of Lise's hand in her hair as her little stress action. Carolyn and the others did a great job, I was really lucky to have their help.

Heh, the solid-color-with-bluejeans came because I asked each model to come in their character's signature color, and they all happened to come wearing jeans with it. :-)