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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost
6. Stag Night
7. Wingmen
8. Mr. Carter
9. Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
10. Suiting Up

Chapter summary: A knock at the door when Peggy’s on a mission throws plans into a tailspin.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost
6. Stag Night
7. Wingmen
8. Mr. Carter
9. Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Chapter summary: Peggy may be struggling with pregnancy, but there's someone who knows what she's going through, and has an idea of how to help.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost
6. Stag Night
7. Wingmen
8. Mr. Carter

Chapter summary: Steve and Peggy tell people about their pregnancy, and Steve works out his fears.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost
6. Stag Night
7. Wingmen

Chapter summary: Steve and Peggy begin their married life together, but exceptional people never quite become ordinary, even when they try.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost
6. Stag Night

Chapter summary: Steve hangs with his wingmen before his wedding.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds
5. Ghost

Chapter summary: Steve and Peggy are going to get married. But first, Howard and Jarvis take him out to celebrate.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching
4. Bonds

Chapter summary: Steve confronts a ghost from his former life who, in a way, has a presence here in his new one.

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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building
3. Reaching

Chapter summary: Steve makes connections with the people in his life— some old friends, and some new. And comes to a decision about the connection that matters most.
~~~

Chapter 4 - “Bonds” )

Next chapter: 5. Ghost
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time
2. Building

Chapter summary: Steve reveals himself to some select few people.
~~~

Chapter 3 - “Reaching” )

Next chapter: 4. Bonds
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Previous chapters:
1. Lost Time

Chapter summary: Steve gets to building his life in earnest.
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Forever Captain:
“His Part to Play”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “Steve Rogers has retired to the 1940s to build a new life with Peggy. In leaving behind the mantle of Captain America, at last he’s got a measure of peace. Still, Steve will never stop feeling the responsibility to step up as a hero— except he's not sure how much power his actions have at this point in the timeline. Somehow he must reconcile his new life and identity with the responsibility and burden of being a hero out of time.”

Chapter summary: Steve and Peggy's first days reunited in the midcentury post-Endgame.
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Into the Spider-Verse:
“Dad Body”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: Peter thought that he'd done too much to screw up his old life. But Miles's faith in him made him wonder if maybe he had it in him to fix things after all.

Previous chapters:
1. Call, Not Text
2. Flowers

Chapter summary: Peter makes his case.

~~~

Chapter 3 - “Ready” )

~~~

The End
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Into the Spider-Verse:
“Dad Body”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: Peter thought that he'd done too much to screw up his old life. But Miles's faith in him made him wonder if maybe he had it in him to fix things after all.

Previous chapters:
1. Call, Not Text

Chapter summary: Peter goes to see Mary Jane, for the first time in over a year.

~~~

Chapter 2 - “Flowers” )

~~~

Next chapter: 3. Ready
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Into the Spider-Verse:
“Dad Body”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: Peter thought that he'd done too much to screw up his old life. But Miles's faith in him made him wonder if maybe he had it in him to fix things after all.

~~~

Chapter 1 - “Call, Not Text” )

~~~

Next chapter: 2. Flowers
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aidaneyes


It began, as these things often do, with a woman.

It was a tale they would tell for the millennia to follow, the Great War waged when a son of the house of Atreus lost his young bride to Ilium. Some said the Trojan prince stole her, took her against her will from her rightful lord. Others say she was seduced, by the cunning of an artful young man with a silver tongue. Or perhaps she ran away, Helen herself, away from the aged husband she was given to for a boy that was more to her liking. However it came to be, the stories agreed on one thing— that Helen was beautiful, the most beautiful, so that neither Menelaus nor his brethren of Greece would bear the insult of her loss.

And so the kings and commanders gathered up their men and packed them into the thousand ships that would assail the gates of Troy. Across the land, women saw their husbands and fathers, brothers and sons, summoned away from their duties to home and family to serve this their higher calling, their lord’s honor at war. And for ten years their women would bear life’s burdens without them, until Helen was returned or despaired of. But Helen was beautiful, the most beautiful, and so a thousand ships was a small price to pay to reclaim her.

The war raged on in epic fashion, a bloody clash that chewed up men in waves. Best beloveds were lost, fine sons lay slain, and rivers choked with those dead in the wake of grief’s unheeding fury. And all the while, the women at home had no choice but to tend the fires and work the fields, keep the house and uphold the state. The burden was great, in that it was all burdens. But so it often is, for those whose lot it is to wait, to obey, to sacrifice, to submit.

But ten years had passed. Ten years of men clashing for their honor and soldiers bleeding out on the Ilium sands, of wives watching the shores and sending their sons off to die. Ten years is a long time to wait.

And so across the sea, those at home decided. Faithful Penelope had grown tired of waiting. Clytemnestra would lose no more children to Agamemnon’s whim. And at last, Cassandra would make her voice heard.

When finally the war ended— with a trick, and not with a rout —the invading kings gathered the remains of their army to return to their homes in Greece. Victory was theirs, in that beautiful Helen was returned to the kingdom of her husband. But the surviving soldiers straggled back to those long-awaited shores to find their wives and daughters in the fields, at the helms, and in the offices they’d abandoned. Once left to their province alone, all the burdens and the powers that came of bearing them now rested in their women’s hands. And the women now knew they neither wanted nor needed to hand that province back over. After ten years, they would wait, obey, sacrifice, and submit no longer.

A regnant queen, with her own power Penelope cast all her vile suitors from her hall as Odysseus was lost to the angry sea. After surviving the whole of the war, Agamemnon’s throat was opened in his own bath. And rather than slay the Trojan princess he’d taken captive, Clytemnestra heard her words that would spread like wildfire across the land. There would be, Cassandra said, no more dominion over women by men. And those handfuls of returning soldiers, too few and too broken by years of war, found they had no power left to work their will.

Helen’s aged husband died, leaving a wearied kingdom bereft of sons. Once again, all eyes turned to her, the woman whose beauty sent ripples through the world. But she was queen now, a queen for a new age, where the silence of the cities of men echoed in testament of their folly. So Helen took those eyes, and made them follow her, the beautiful queen, the most beautiful. Not content with their eyes, she took their ears too, telling a new story into that silence. From mother to daughter it was handed down, from Greek to generation of Greek, among Helen’s descendants in all the people who would bear her name. Until at the time came when the granddaughters of Dido— not that lumbering cipher upon whom she wasted no time when he washed up on her kingdom’s shores —grew up to found the most magnificent city in the world.

It began with a woman, and so would it go on.
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The most effective way of producing writing for me has always been the "vomit draft" method-- or, if you prefer a less disgusting description, the process by which you just make yourself write some garbage, no matter how badly it's coming out, until you have some semblance of a beginning, middle, and end such that you can by some measure call the draft "complete." I discovered this method in grad school, and it revolutionized the way I worked. Up to that point I was writing constantly, producing volumes, without ever actually finishing anything. I would try to edit as I go and end up spending forever tweaking individual sentences, or not actually writing things until I was certain I "knew what I wanted to do with them"-- which meant nothing ever actually got drafted. Now, whenever I have a project I want to work on, I make as detailed an outline as I can so I have a roadmap, then I just puke something out, and then go back and edit it after it's complete. I recommend this method to my students, or anyone struggling to write things, because you can fix something that's on the page-- you can't improve a piece that doesn't even exist.

Lately though I've got a couple of "first drafted" projects laying around, technically complete but still in a state of garbageitude, waiting to be edited. As tough as I find drafting, I find editing to be even harder-- WAH WRITING IS HARD YOU GUYZ. Usually I push through the editing process fairly immediately, due to the fear of losing momentum, but I do find taking a short break from the piece can be helpful to looking at it with a more critical eye to improvement. However, I have to balance that, as I do lose momentum if I wait too long, or I rush it and don't always do the best job.

Right now I have two "technically complete" pieces laying around in first draft form, which is unusual for me. The first is my "Frasier" spinoff pilot, as yet unnamed, which I never dove into editing because something more pressing came up, though I currently can't remember what it was. That one has good bones but is pretty much a mess and will need a lot of fixing. I came up with a lot of things I wanted to do with it, but it's been long enough I'm a bit worried I won't be able to actually remember what they all are. I took some notes, but I'm not certain they're enough. This is hardly a pressing project, as there's nothing I can do with it, but I liked the concept and I'm going to fix it up at some point.

The second is a short story which I banged out over the last few weeks, mostly to get in a little practice as to writing prose. I find prose to be incredibly challenging, probably due to the fact that I've done so little study or practice of it in the last five to ten years while I've focused on drama. This will likely need a TON of work, again due to my inability. When I finished I wanted to take a nice break from it, and fortunately I have no preconceived notions of what it will need to improve, so I'm not worried about forgetting anything. However it will definitely need work before I show it to anyone, and the difficulty of that may make me avoidant over it. I will have to steel myself to get through, given that I struggle to believe my prose has the potential to not suck.

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Yesterday I tried a free writing exercise. In prose, no less. Write one page or so of something, whatever came to mind, and just go with it. It's designed to help me with motivation and to prevent compulsive editing during the drafting process.

Well, I did it, but it went somewhere weird. Or, rather, it exposed some of the stuff that happened to be in my head right now that kind of surprised me. Although perhaps it really shouldn't have...

Anyway, it went somewhere weird.

To an alternate-universe matriarchal Ancient Rome, apparently, and also can you tell I really want to see Cap 2 for certain reasons? I don't even know. )
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My last science fiction and fantasy submission for the semester. This time I tried to introduce a lighter element by showing Gabriel having a friend. There are in the Ministers of Grace who have gotten past his appearance and nature. One of them is Marcus, a student from America who was sought out for his manifestation of powers of superhuman strength. He tries to be a good friend, even when it's hard, and calls Gabriel "Batman." There's also a mention of Rachel, who is an English student with the power of empathy, and her agnosticism has not been improved by witnessing what Gabriel has to go through.

"Whatever you say, Batman." )
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This is another piece of Fallen that I wrote for school. It builds upon this piece, where Julien offers to hear Gabriel's confessions in hopes of helping ease his burden. But he learns that Gabriel's burden is greater than he'd ever guessed, and he has no idea how he's going to find the way to help him.

Julien had an engagement late on Sunday nights. )

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This is part of what I wrote for my most recent science fiction and fantasy submission. This is another part of Fallen, this time from the point of view of a young priest named Father Julien Alencon. He is French and gifted with a power he calls "insight," the ability to receive flashes of truth about the natures of people around him. He was chosen to replace the last chaplain at the school of St. Michael's because of his record and his power. This is the beginning of his relationship with Gabriel.

Confession with the new priest )

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