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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time
4. Before This Day Ends
5. Nobody's Hero
6. Promises to Keep
7. Coming Clean
8. Old Men

Chapter summary: Steve helps Howard come to a decision about fatherhood, and comes to one of his own about his place as the man out of time.
~~~

Chapter 9 - “Wanted” )

THE END
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Recently I was talking about my inability to estimate the word count or even chapter number of my prose, and usually I guess wildly too low. Not a big deal, but could be frustrating when it comes to planning purposes, when you have a lot more work to account for than you thought! For example, The Hemingway Trip, my current WIP fanfic about Steve Rogers and Howard Stark’s friendship in the midcentury post Steve’s retirement in Endgame, grew to several times longer than I expected, with what I then guessed was 10,000 words rather than 5,000, and 8 chapters up from a proposed 4. But I was finally on the last chapter, so I was confident I knew where it was going to end up.

Well, guess what? I had to break the final chapter into two. Now there’s going to be NINE chapters total— GOD HELP ME IF THAT CHANGES —and probably more like 12,000 words.

WHY AM I SO BAD AT ESTIMATING THIS? 🤣 I’ve written several hundred thousand words of fan fic total at this point— you’d think I’d know my own writing habits better than this at this point!
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I’m really bad at estimating how long my prose pieces are going to turn out to be. Both chapter numbers and word count. My “quick side fics” in Forever Captain, my Steve Rogers post-Endgame retirement series, always turn out at least twice as long as I expect them to be. I had a story that went so long I had to cut off the “prelude” part at 30k words. My current WIP The Hemingway Trip is eight chapters after starting from a proposed three.

It’s partially because I end up expanding, partially because things just take more space than I imagine. I believe a story should be whatever length it needs to be to fully be told, so I don’t really mind. But it means everything takes much longer to finish than I plan. And you’d think I’d have learned how to estimate better by now— but nope!
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time
4. Before This Day Ends
5. Nobody's Hero
6. Promises to Keep
7. Coming Clean

Chapter summary: Steve and Howard go on one more fishing trip, and Howard gives Steve some big news.
~~~

Chapter 8 - “Old Men” )

Next chapter: 9. Wanted
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time
4. Before This Day Ends
5. Nobody's Hero
6. Promises to Keep

Chapter summary: Howard deals with the consequences of his actions, but Steve makes it so he doesn't have to do it alone.
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time
4. Before This Day Ends
5. Nobody's Hero

Chapter summary: Steve doesn't fully understand what Howard is going through. But he can be there to help him work through it.
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time
4. Before This Day Ends

Chapter summary: Howard gets honest and confesses— and more than he intends to.
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink
3. Rough Time

Chapter summary: It take some doing, but Steve gets Howard to talk about what's going on with him.
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SCENE: a long, echoey hallway in the depths of the Author’s brain. 
 
A man in late middle age with a seventies mustache and an expensive, wide-lapeled suit checks the names on a bunch of doors. His oxfords click on the polished floor as he passes them. SYMPATHY PUMPS. POWER FANTASIES. MORALITY PETS. DREAM DADDIES. Intriguing as that last may be, with the blacked-out glass in its window, he continues onward. Finally he finds the one he’s looking for, and slips inside.
 
The rest have already arrived there. They are a… strange assortment, to say the least. Two have the accents, manners, and attire of middle class Victorians, a lean woman in widow’s weeds and a handsome bachelor toying with a walking stick. The last is a modern professional man, just a bit younger than the newcomer, with slicked hair and sunglasses indoors. 
 
When our first man enters, they nod politely and take their seats. Clearly they have very little to do with one another in most cases— even the two Victorians who share a surname prefer not to be in the same room —but they have one thing in common that has brought them there today. 
 
Styrofoam cup of lukewarm coffee in hand, the newcomer addresses the group. “Hey, everybody. I’m the new guy, I guess. The name’s Howard. Howard Stark.”
 
A chorus of diction-appropriate variations on “Hello, Howard,” sound. 
 
“Yeah, I been on the roster for a little while now— mostly comic relief, I guess.” 
 
The Victorian man cackles. “I know, eh?”
 
“Yeah, well, she likes writing in my voice— gettin’ to toss in a little midcentury salesman razzle-dazzle here and there. Mostly I had fun, even though I was the butt of something now and again. Showed up, had some fun, fell in love, got a nice little character journey. But then she had another idea.”
 
The man in the sunglasses snorts. “That’s how it starts.”
 
“Suddenly it’s fifteen years later, I’m in this mess over Vietnam. And everybody’s mad at me, and I’m drinking all the time, and stepping out on my wife. And when my time-traveling buddy takes me fishing to ask me what’s up… turns out it’s all I’m acting out because I’m—“
 
The others in the room finish his sentence all as one. “—getting older.” 
 
Howard nods frantically. “Damn skippy. I mean, I know folks like to figure out why I turned out to be kind of asshole— but loose and drunk? Is that even canon?”
 
“A strong case could be made.” Sunglasses shrugs. “You could say it’s pretty strongly implied.”
 
“Well. Even so. I learned pretty quick this was a thing with her. Guess I figured she’d get on it again— but you never think it’s going to happen to you.” 
 
“And no mistake,” the man with the walking stick agrees. “She gave me a show all to myself— not even my golden boy little brother got that. And she built it entirely around my romantic escapades. And what do I have, smack dab in the middle of my gallivanting? References to middle age spread and the grim specter of aging past my flirtatious charm. Rather takes the wind of a fellow’s sails.”
 
“At least you just got the memento mori treatment,” Sunglasses rejoins. “She threw my back out and had me hook up with an old lady just to get my groove back.”
 
Walking Stick winks at him. “For what it’s worth, Dresden, I think you look smashing.” 
 
“Have to say I agree. But instead of losing my looks, I just had to settle for physical punishment for the sin of not being twenty.”
 
Finally the widow speaks, barking a laugh. “Ha! You call that physical punishment?”
 
Sunglasses rolls his eyes. “Yeah, yeah, we know, Hawking, nobody ever gets it worse than you.”
 
“You’re not the one she uses as a sink for all her doubts. You think you’re pulled through the wringer? Call me when she puts a bullet in your gut!” She raps her fist on her abdomen for emphasis, then fold her arms.
 
Howard looks uncomfortably from face to face. “So… what do you? When she’s riding you hard about it?”
 
“Not much one can, I’m afraid,” Walking Stick admits. “She’s the boss. And God knows she’s only going to get worse about it as time goes on.”
 
Sunglasses grunts. “Well. That’s bleak.”
 
“Could be bleaker,” the widow commented. “We could be her. We’ll stay as we are forever.” Her eyes roll to Howard.  “The only one really getting older here is her.” 
 
He considered this. “In that case… anybody feel like a game of cards?”
 
Walking Stick grins. “Best enjoy the bridge while there’s only four of us. Because more are certainly sure to come.”
 
“Hm,” Sunglasses murmurs. “Better set out some more chairs.”
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers
2. In the Drink

Chapter summary: Steve recalls another fishing trip he took Howard on, when his friend was clearly going through a difficult time.
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”

Previous chapters:
1. Birds of Odd Feathers

Chapter summary: Steve recalls the first time he made Howard go fishing with him.
~~~

Chapter 2 - “In the Drink” )

Next chapter: 3. Rough Time
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Forever Captain:
“The Hemingway Trip”
By Phoebe Roberts
~~~

Summary: “In the twenty years since Steve Rogers returned to the midcentury to build a life and family, he’s always been surprised at how close he became with Howard Stark. But it’s that very closeness that makes him the only person Howard can talk to when he’s wrestling with something big.

Nothing like a fishing trip to give the boys a chance to talk.”
~~~

Chapter 1 - “Birds of Odd Feathers” )
~~~

Next chapter: 2. In the Drink

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